Score: 4

"Kinda Ok."

submission: A Tutorial for n00bs 3

date: February 27, 2006

I haven't seen many tutorials on here so I'm flying blind, but your writing is friendly (a couple of gramatical errors I can't be bothered finding for you sorry) and the mood is light, it's a good little help thing. Ironically it seems kinda fresh itself though heh. Just the graphics weren't you know, awe inspiring or anything. It's alright, pity new people will never see it buried in the portal!

Score: 9

"Fantastic"

submission: If Only To Fly

date: February 27, 2006

A breath of fresh air from the typical NG fare - a great little movie. Great little story, very well animated adorable character, fantastic stuff. I hope your enthusiasm doesn't wane on flash as this is a really excellent start, truely excellent! Well done.

Score: 4

"It's ok."

submission: 61 Seconds

date: February 24, 2006

Well, no points for originality. Things you might like to do something about for your next one - don't have everything happen without any scrolling or movement of the background - these days flash has to be a bit more than a single scene to be anything decent. The bullet time doesn't really work when they aren't zooming in on the action or anything. The bullets were crap, the contrast of the yellow on the background was too hard to see - black would be a better bet. The blood wasn't detailed at all.. it's the little details like that that set a decent flash apart from the halfassed, and really take so little time to do when you consider how long it took to make the whole flash. It's alright, character movement and so on was pretty good, maybe you'd find it all more rewarding if you made up your own story and animated that instead of super random violence featuring other peoples creations! I'm sorry this sounds so negative.

Score: 5

"Bland"

submission: Wild Boys

date: February 24, 2006

Trying to be constructive here - you need some sound effects, and less writing. The graphics are great though!

Score: 10

"Fantastic!"

submission: Hey You - Pink Floyd

date: February 21, 2006

That was awesome. Great work! I loved the animation of the character, the first glance was sweet as. Your mouth syncing is pretty impressive, I know how much that sucks, and since you had a decent framerate (another positive) I know it must've taken ages. The shading was great, like the grass - simple and effective. Your style is fantastic.

And for the nitpicking, for your next movie to do even better -
The preloader was pretty crappy. It doesn't even work properly - just edit the newgrounds one, it's right there under the submit flash to the portal button and they want you to do it! The loader could also use a title, a picture of the main character standing there or something, to give it some ... class I spose. That's actually the only thing I remember that I didn't particularly like, except for some bits where i thought the hair was looking a bit funny, or when the character is walking along and I thought it would've been better if he was sketch-animated (in a loop!) rather than a boring tween walk. I hope you know what bit I'm talking about.

I really liked this movie, it's a real work of art I hope you're proud of it!

Score: 1

"Crap"

submission: Dog fight

date: February 21, 2006

You need a preloader. I am writing this while your movie loads. You can get the newgrounds one off the portal front page under the submit button, then you can edit it to suit your movie.
Well I just watched it, I'm sure you enjoyed making that but you need plot and all the other stuff I assume you already know you need to not make a peice of crap.

Score: 8

"Pretty good"

submission: Naughty Cupid

date: February 15, 2006

Don't read this if you're just about to view the animation -

Due to the shadow on Cupids back I thought it was an arse the whole time - I thought it was some guys arse doing a chick and I was waiting for it to move! Maybe that says more about me than your graphics..

Cute little animation, well done.

Score: 7

"Great"

submission: VD Love Valentine

date: February 15, 2006

Great little pessimistic joke there -

Great graphics! Maybe too good, as it looks like since they're so good you haven't been particularly arsed in making more of them. You could possibly toy with stretching and skewing the objects a little bit here and there to give it more movement, if you're really looking for stunning stuff. I loved the clip though!

Score: 7

"Not a bad point"

submission: Hardcore Gamer

date: February 15, 2006

One could say that about Flash movie makers too, heh. Nicely illustrated point - ain't that the truth!

Score: 6

"Alright"

submission: Valentine's Day Muffin

date: February 14, 2006

Not a bad little thing, you've done some really cool fake 3D effects in there I noticed - good stuff! It's a bit slow but then it's meant to be. I dunno if that dude (what is it, nat king cole?) should be in the form of a muffin particularly, but a nice effort none the less heh.