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[Jet Pack]

Pretty good!

For early animations this is really good! Things to improve on - background graphics are needed. It's boring with nothing. Make something with a point, or a twist, or a moral, or something, and it'll do better. I liked your animation style, I hope you'll continue because that was quite good! Niggly things, I'd keep his mouth in his face. And parts were a bit lazy, like not showing the blasting up with the smoke - I know it would've taken a while but it would've been cool. The way the jetpack folded out was great! All the best.

[Emo]

You lost me at 'lol'.

Don't put 'lol' in your movie, if it's funny it'll get a laugh, if not - no. It's not a very complex peice, but it's kindof well done. Would be more amusing if you went into more detail about the whole emo-ness really, taking the piss out of particular points - but it's alright, well done.

[Primal War 08]

Not your best

It doesn't look like you're much occupied with being populist, but I quite agree with that Hamster dude about this episode. Nothing happens at all really, I assume it's because my computer sucks as to why the music stopped well before the flash did, so a big slab of this had no sound at all. Just the extent to which the females were 'humans with tails' and the males were 'beasts with faces' was the problem for me. If you want to draw chicks in bikinis, just take time out from the series to draw chicks in bikinis. Your animation and artwork are great as always, just the direction of this one wasn't up to the benchmark expected from your previous work, I suppose. It's not crap by any means, but I'm not keen to watch it again, put it that way. I'm sure the next episode'll get back on track. Your xfactor is the whole beast thing in this series, not hairy women. Its yours to do what you will though, so all the best with the rest of it - though I would suggest not holding off finishing the series too long or it'll get too obvious and tired. You could always make something with bikini girls in it afterwards!

[Engineered]

Very good!

That was great! I loved the wee details, the dash in the robots eyes, etc. The young were well done too, must be hard to pull of that kind of look in flash well. It's a great wee plot, you can get a bit of meaning out of it, which is excellent work! Big ups all round for this!

[El Despertar]

Very nice!

I really quite enjoyed this peice, it's great to see something that's a bit different on NG. Your style and everything are something special. I haven't given this a perfect score, just because the graphics were a bit 'clunky' and not so fluid, if you get me. Don't get me wrong, they're great, and there's kudos for tackling some angles and detail and things that you did in this - but there's room for improvement there. Possibly amp the framerate up a bit in future episodes. Keep it up, you're definately onto a great idea for establishing a web presense with this series.

[Flystrip 4]

I remember your previous episodes

And this wasn't really as good in my opinion, and I'm sorry about it. I came into watching meaning to give you a 5 because the other episodes were underloved from memory - but this didn't really warrant it, the added character and cameo of steve were a bit ... reaching. The whole concept relies on the fly humour, and adding other things just makes it like every other short skit on here, which is nothing new. I am sorry about this, but I thought I should suggest why the vote is low.

GUTOONs responds:

Thanks for reviewing again.
Input is definately appreciated.
Hopefully their trip to the Chinese joint in Fly5 will be more to your liking.

GU

[Kung Fu Pigeon]

Tired

Well, there's definately aspects of this that were great - I found the style, no outline edges kinda thing, quite interesting - but the whole thing was quite slow and I found myself bored, wanting to close it. My only suggestions are to up the pace of action, and something with more direction than nothing would be beneficial.

[Walky Talky Man]

Sucks

The only thing ok about this is the song, but even that's not that good - and since all you did was click 'import' and (thank god) had the sense to compress it, you get no credit for that, obviously. As for the graphics, they're ok, but you just recycled everything, and it's completely aimless and stupid. Make a music video with a plot if you're doing them - hell, they're boring enough watching the actual band just bounce around, worse if it's a fairly halfassedly drawn character doing the same loop over and over. Put some more work into making something and it'll do better - the more you put in, the more you get out. Unless you're making flash, then you stay in, but the girls put out - or something like that. Yea, so plot development, spend some time on the next one - it's ok if it takes a month or so to complete one, because it won't be rubbish at the end of it. People take 6 hours doing a bloody webcomic with like four frames, it's ok to spend time on a flash movie.

[Zombies8myneighborTrailer]

Worst thing I've seen this year.

This is the biggest turd ever - I was expecting crap, but not to this extent! Every single bit of text had a gramatical or spelling error, every single one - and since all this movie is is text, there goes the content. I had a great time playing that game with my buddies, and all you did here was make it suck by association. Here's some tips - you're not a big name animator, so let your work speak for itself - don't flash your name all over the place until AFTER the movie. Noone cares if you made a screenshot of a couple of GIFs and did a slow tween on them. There's no content to this, it's just crap. Absolute crap. Make the movie, don't make bloody pointless, stupid, ratarse trailers!

AngelnX responds:

You got issues, serious issues

[Katrina's Coming!]

Halarious

That totally cracked me up, heheheh, excellent use of sound there at the end!