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I really quite enjoyed that.

That was pretty amusing, nicely done! Shadows on the legs of the sticks, that is dedication to detail. I have no idea how you did the psycadelic kalaedascopes but they were really awesome, you sure know how to use flash to its best! (and worst with that billy bit)

Pretty Poor

Well I'm rating this four years after the fact (you sure find weird when you go random) but well, I guess people try harder these days heh. It's alright as far as old stick goes.

A nice peice of work

Not a bad little animation. The fairly simple story was pretty dry and the whole thing didn't rattle my dags at all to be honest. However the animation was at times great, however other times it seemed a little amateurish, tweens too slow, that kind of thing. And the 'cartoony' style of running is fine if you're going there, but it wasn't well executed. The sound effects were appropriate but pretty cutty without music, which would have added a lot to this film. The final shot knocked my vote down a notch - sure, you drew a stripper, but just because it's a good graphic doesn't make it suits this flash in the slightest. Don't let this review get you down though (you'd say it didn't anyway) as it really is a promising little thing, you've got the skill there. An increased pace and a more interesting story with some background music could make your next effort a stunner.

remyzero responds:

hey thanks, this was what I call my very first flash animation. It took a long time, and has been completed for quite sometime now, I just needed to re-sync the sound. I hope that my animation has improved for the next one that I am working on. I will keep you advice in mind. thanks.

Kinda Ok.

I haven't seen many tutorials on here so I'm flying blind, but your writing is friendly (a couple of gramatical errors I can't be bothered finding for you sorry) and the mood is light, it's a good little help thing. Ironically it seems kinda fresh itself though heh. Just the graphics weren't you know, awe inspiring or anything. It's alright, pity new people will never see it buried in the portal!

FoyvenMaven responds:

Well, you're supposed to ficus on the ideas being taught. ^^;

Fantastic

A breath of fresh air from the typical NG fare - a great little movie. Great little story, very well animated adorable character, fantastic stuff. I hope your enthusiasm doesn't wane on flash as this is a really excellent start, truely excellent! Well done.

It's ok.

Well, no points for originality. Things you might like to do something about for your next one - don't have everything happen without any scrolling or movement of the background - these days flash has to be a bit more than a single scene to be anything decent. The bullet time doesn't really work when they aren't zooming in on the action or anything. The bullets were crap, the contrast of the yellow on the background was too hard to see - black would be a better bet. The blood wasn't detailed at all.. it's the little details like that that set a decent flash apart from the halfassed, and really take so little time to do when you consider how long it took to make the whole flash. It's alright, character movement and so on was pretty good, maybe you'd find it all more rewarding if you made up your own story and animated that instead of super random violence featuring other peoples creations! I'm sorry this sounds so negative.

Erikcq responds:

Thanks a LOT for your review. You know, this is the way I want the reviews to be. I mean, I love the ones that say "Oh, that was great!" (hehe), but this one here, tells me what I have to do to improve my movies, and what was ok.
Thanks again.

Erikcq

Fantastic!

That was awesome. Great work! I loved the animation of the character, the first glance was sweet as. Your mouth syncing is pretty impressive, I know how much that sucks, and since you had a decent framerate (another positive) I know it must've taken ages. The shading was great, like the grass - simple and effective. Your style is fantastic.

And for the nitpicking, for your next movie to do even better -
The preloader was pretty crappy. It doesn't even work properly - just edit the newgrounds one, it's right there under the submit flash to the portal button and they want you to do it! The loader could also use a title, a picture of the main character standing there or something, to give it some ... class I spose. That's actually the only thing I remember that I didn't particularly like, except for some bits where i thought the hair was looking a bit funny, or when the character is walking along and I thought it would've been better if he was sketch-animated (in a loop!) rather than a boring tween walk. I hope you know what bit I'm talking about.

I really liked this movie, it's a real work of art I hope you're proud of it!

Svend-1 responds:

thanks for the compliments

about the preloader: my friend made one and stuck it on there, i never saw it before the movie was uploaded =/ i'll be sure to test one next time

thanks, im not really proud of the movie itself, just really proud at the fact that i could complete a large project as such (the real point of making this)
peace

Pretty good

Don't read this if you're just about to view the animation -

Due to the shadow on Cupids back I thought it was an arse the whole time - I thought it was some guys arse doing a chick and I was waiting for it to move! Maybe that says more about me than your graphics..

Cute little animation, well done.

Great

Great little pessimistic joke there -

Great graphics! Maybe too good, as it looks like since they're so good you haven't been particularly arsed in making more of them. You could possibly toy with stretching and skewing the objects a little bit here and there to give it more movement, if you're really looking for stunning stuff. I loved the clip though!

Not a bad point

One could say that about Flash movie makers too, heh. Nicely illustrated point - ain't that the truth!

I'm not putting my lips on that.

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