Pretty good
There's some good stuff in this, but there's also some average stuff. I can't really put my finger on it, perhaps there was too much of the same guy running in one place for a lot of the movie, and at times it was pretty hard to understand wtf was going on. This kind of rough style is ok if it's moving so fast you don't really take in how halfassed the drawings are, but you do not move too fast for this. The plot is nothing new either. Just to be pedantic, shouldn't chapter 2 come first, then chapter 1 be the 'five hours earlier' one, kill bill styles? Is that what you meant to do? *spoiler* I also thought there were some sketchy bits such as the guy being able to dodge thousands of rounds, but then being killed by a sniper.
Positive points, the music was great (except maybe amore) and it's clear you have great style. Sorry this is more negative than I meant it to be, I did really like your movie.