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[The Megatrix: part 2]

Originality?

I know you won't apprechiate this review - But hasn't the Matrix been done to death already, wouldn't something original be a lot more interesting? Yes, yes it would. Not the EXACT plot, with just neo replaced with megaman and so on. I mean we all know exactly what's happening due to the Matrix movie, if we didn't the Flash would make no sense whatsoever.

Plus you really needed RATM for the last bit there, I was all 'well at least he'll have RATM' but you didn't.

Otherwise, you animated it well, the sorta boot up thing when he got back up was pretty good.

[The Eye]

Blah

Well it was pretty unexciting - I recommend some music. It's great smooth animation, I'm in the process of making a frame by frame music video with stick figures myself at the moment.

But definately some music, and a faster pace would be good. But it's a great start, I'd expand on it.

[The Power]

Excellent!

I LOVE the sound in this movie! Especially at the start, the car doors opening and such, it was excellent. The voices were hard to understand, but better than subtitles - although next time, try using your own voice in a mic. You're bound to think it sounds stupid, but noone else will care.

The story wasn't bad, although I wasn't too sure what was going on at the end either. Infact I had no idea what was going on, but it was still entertaining!

[Crazy Dave]

Halarious

Well I've just been reviewing about 20 movies because I'm that bored, and this is the first one to actually make me laugh - great stuff on the humour! It's pretty obvious theres private joke written all over this, however you did the character great, the tooth twinkle was quality and the (probably drunken) shout is all class.

[The Matrix Reloaded]

What?

Well I have to give no points for originality, no points for sound. However the building was well done, and unless the window-smash was pre-made I can imagine that took a while to get to work - however it doesn't really strike me as suitable for vector animation as it loads like a dog. And that other guy was pretty accurate, the stick has no constancy at all - it would be good if the stick didn't have parkinsons - and was obviously standing up when we first see it (her?) side on, at the moment she appears to fold out from herself. Otherwise, the colours were good and your intro is nice, don't get disillusioned by this it's not a load of crap by any means.

[The Heist I]

Good Stuff

Firstly, excellent choice of name, it just jumped out and smacked me in the face like a cold fish. Probably because I made a movie of the same name ages ago! :)

Anyway the kindof goth style is awesome - great stuff working it into the flow of the music too! The guy smearing his blood down the window was a nice touch.

The only gripe I have is that I had little idea wtf was going on, as many characters looked pretty similar - you could give one a goatie or something, I don't know.

Excellent smooth animation, cool original bits of action (like the jumping into the passing van) etc, it was all pretty entertaining.

n0ir responds:

wow. thanks for noticing all the little details! Im glad you liked it!

[Mega Man xXx preview]

Weak!

Nothing happens! It starts off looking like there will be no music, and just as the music starts to get some actual action in it the movie finishes! There is nothing in this at all! A trailer is supposed to at least hint at something!

[anime]

It's hardly a movie

Gee chuck, it starts off good but really doesn't deliver in the 'anything happening' area! But that's not overly annoying because it is quite small, so you're optimising properly good stuff.

It looks like it will be good if you actually finish it, but I cannot vote highly on a Flash that is half done!

[4) MmmmHmmmm...?]

This was cool!

You've got style man that was just class, loved the end! That you didn't give into temptation and do it, it's great. Great soundtrack too

[Big E]

Not bad!

Well optimised movie! Constructive Crit: You really need music, and sound. It is really easy to find a machine gun and explosion noise, and I'm sure you could find some fitting hardcore peice of soundtrack for this in no time flat!
I liked the dog robot things, but your main robot I think could use a bit more 'meat on bones'. That might just be me, it is clear you were going for that kind of futuristic type thing there but just having the joints closer or something would appease me at any rate.
I loved the breaking through the brick wall, and must say I'm kinda suprised that your explosions were nothing like that. Maybe you could work on the explosions, and have them flop down less (they're not fireworks unless you're having about 40 frames on them!)
Also when it does the whole leave a fade behind him thing at the end, you could set the alpha value of the trailing robots to lower and lower as the impressions get older, that's always helpful there. (easy to do if you put the robots whole action in that sequence into a sub movie and just change the alphas of separate movie objects)
It is quite entertaining, I like the blue sparks coming off all the time and some of the action is great - overall, Music would really make this waaay better!