To be frank
I'm not sure what to say. Radiohead is a great soundtrack for this though, good stuff.
And if you're talking about your own experience, I'm sorry - that kind of thing has got to hurt a lot. Deaths fade with time but with your love, thats just horrible and I can't imagine anything worse - I hope you've got good friends! Alternatively if you're making everything up, you're a peice of shit for doing so.
And in the techincal side, you could do the shape tweens better they were pretty crazy - put in shape guides to help it out. Or in the case of the stick man, you could have just moved 6 bits around the screen yourself. :)