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[H the shit eater - part 1]

Suprisingly funny

Geez talk about an axe to grind guy - that said this animation is actually quite funny - I have no idea what the hell was going on at the end there but it totally cracked me up due to the fact. NG content often struggles to make me laugh, so I gave this some sugar.

[Shorts 16-20]

I really quite enjoyed that.

That was pretty amusing, nicely done! Shadows on the legs of the sticks, that is dedication to detail. I have no idea how you did the psycadelic kalaedascopes but they were really awesome, you sure know how to use flash to its best! (and worst with that billy bit)

[Jurassic Foe]

A nice peice of work

Not a bad little animation. The fairly simple story was pretty dry and the whole thing didn't rattle my dags at all to be honest. However the animation was at times great, however other times it seemed a little amateurish, tweens too slow, that kind of thing. And the 'cartoony' style of running is fine if you're going there, but it wasn't well executed. The sound effects were appropriate but pretty cutty without music, which would have added a lot to this film. The final shot knocked my vote down a notch - sure, you drew a stripper, but just because it's a good graphic doesn't make it suits this flash in the slightest. Don't let this review get you down though (you'd say it didn't anyway) as it really is a promising little thing, you've got the skill there. An increased pace and a more interesting story with some background music could make your next effort a stunner.

remyzero responds:

hey thanks, this was what I call my very first flash animation. It took a long time, and has been completed for quite sometime now, I just needed to re-sync the sound. I hope that my animation has improved for the next one that I am working on. I will keep you advice in mind. thanks.

[61 Seconds]

It's ok.

Well, no points for originality. Things you might like to do something about for your next one - don't have everything happen without any scrolling or movement of the background - these days flash has to be a bit more than a single scene to be anything decent. The bullet time doesn't really work when they aren't zooming in on the action or anything. The bullets were crap, the contrast of the yellow on the background was too hard to see - black would be a better bet. The blood wasn't detailed at all.. it's the little details like that that set a decent flash apart from the halfassed, and really take so little time to do when you consider how long it took to make the whole flash. It's alright, character movement and so on was pretty good, maybe you'd find it all more rewarding if you made up your own story and animated that instead of super random violence featuring other peoples creations! I'm sorry this sounds so negative.

Erikcq responds:

Thanks a LOT for your review. You know, this is the way I want the reviews to be. I mean, I love the ones that say "Oh, that was great!" (hehe), but this one here, tells me what I have to do to improve my movies, and what was ok.
Thanks again.

Erikcq

[Naughty Cupid]

Pretty good

Don't read this if you're just about to view the animation -

Due to the shadow on Cupids back I thought it was an arse the whole time - I thought it was some guys arse doing a chick and I was waiting for it to move! Maybe that says more about me than your graphics..

Cute little animation, well done.

[VD Love Valentine]

Great

Great little pessimistic joke there -

Great graphics! Maybe too good, as it looks like since they're so good you haven't been particularly arsed in making more of them. You could possibly toy with stretching and skewing the objects a little bit here and there to give it more movement, if you're really looking for stunning stuff. I loved the clip though!